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  • #16
    I saw a few, and deleted the photos. Oops. But on Ezra's story, page 41, line 5, "if he left and I stayed, would I lose a chance at having (A) brother.

    Also, with the option to follow young Chronos, it should be "i have no idea what I just saw, but it's done more than (pique) my interest". (Not past tense).

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    • #17
      It's in Chapter 7, when Ash meets his team for the trials.
      “Imagination is the only weapon in the war against reality.” - "Alice in Wonderland"

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      • #18
        Great catch. We'll get that fixed next update.

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        • #19
          When Ash asks Riley about why Ezra chose to make the palace look like when Riley was little
          “Imagination is the only weapon in the war against reality.” - "Alice in Wonderland"

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          • #20
            “Imagination is the only weapon in the war against reality.” - "Alice in Wonderland"

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            • #21
              “Imagination is the only weapon in the war against reality.” - "Alice in Wonderland"

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              • #22
                cowbunny

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                • #23
                  “Imagination is the only weapon in the war against reality.” - "Alice in Wonderland"

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                  • #24
                    Thanks Alicia von Gryphon & ElleMaylise! We'll get these all fixed in the next update.

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                    • Alicia von Gryphon
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                      You are welcome
                      (I actually enjoy doing this ) )

                  • #25
                    “Imagination is the only weapon in the war against reality.” - "Alice in Wonderland"

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                    • ChristineMoon
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                      What are you using for the nifty little circles and text?

                  • #26
                    Thanks! We'll get these fixed, without haven't delay!

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                    • #27
                      In chapter 3, Mt. Asura:

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                      • #28
                        Oops! We'll get that fixed. How embarrassing for me me!

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                        • #29
                          Chapter 5, Mt. Asura: (panting for breath)

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                          • #30
                            Thanks! We'll fix that too.

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