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[ChristineMoon]

sorry, I didn't know where to put this...

In Nightshade forest, Alan said, "you have no right to question me... Older brother."

In Roger's memories, it said his twin brother Alan, and their friend.

(Honestly, I like the idea of little brother. But hey, it's your tale...)

[ChristineMoon]

In chapter 3's Lyall, Riley is described as having brown hair. In chapter 1, it's black. (Okay, I know in the memories it's black with tints of brown, so maybe that was a bridge?)

[The Crab]

sorry, I didn't know where to put this...

In Nightshade forest, Alan said, "you have no right to question me... Older brother."

In Roger's memories, it said his twin brother Alan, and their friend.

(Honestly, I like the idea of little brother. But hey, it's your tale...)

Roger and Alan are twins, but Roger is supposedly older by a wee bit. Roger came out first according to their parents. For some reason, they rarely refer to each other as twins and, even though they look very similar, they are not identical. This sentiment of theirs isn't really reflected in the story yet so sorry for the confusion!

[The Crab]

In chapter 3's Lyall, Riley is described as having brown hair. In chapter 1, it's black. (Okay, I know in the memories it's black with tints of brown, so maybe that was a bridge?)

Riley's hair is meant to be a dark, chocolate brown. Some have said it shimmers in the light. The choice of the word "raven" I used was misleading. I'll fix it for the next update.

[ChristineMoon]

I've seen this 2-3 times and can't figure out how to duplicate it, but it's a different description of the Ignis amulet (also mentions it's a key item). I believe the last time around I got it by clicking on info on the twinkle rose?